I am against the death penalty. Because people could mistakes for example, they are fighting each other and one hit another and another just died because of one punch. Actually, they don’t mean to kill people. These call mistakes. And another good example is may be the people on wrongly convicted. They can’t do anything for it. That’s cruel to them. They didn’t do anything and they must die because they were wrongly convicted. If the courts judgement found out that was not guilty after the person die. Once they die, they can’t make them alive again. So, I am against the death penalty.
Danny great ideas to a very difficult topic. You have thought about what you feel and supported with an interesting example.
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Good blogging I look forward to reading more
Miss Suzy :D
good points danny :) exactly why the death penalty should be gone!
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